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1.I've expirance a situation were i have a partner to do  a project from school and we both have different ideas but i like mine better than hers and she likes hers more so we argued a lot that we got in a fight and didn't talk to each other for a few days. one of our friends convinced us to talk again and we did but going back to the project, we had to decide what we were going to do. But again we started to argue and ended fighting again. although we weren't speaking to each other we finished the project and decided to do what she wanted and it turned out horrible and we got a by grade. by that i was even more mad a decided to never talk to her nor be partners in a project.

3.the differences that the vilan and the duper hero have are the villan is always wanting to cause trouble, huts people and is very very evil and in the other hand the super hero is very king is always trying to be peaceful and help everyone that needs it and is very nice. In my opinion all dere differences are goingt o cause problems between and is going to make them fight

non-leanier story critiques

characters 2 , 2
entertainment  2, 3
use of non leaner  1, 3

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In the story that i want to right my main character is this young girl that doesn't know what to do in  her life. her main problem is that she is non confident of her self and always double questions what she is about to do. The three things that she can resolve her problem is to find a person that will let her know that she is better that she thinks she is, win the lottery and do what ever she desires, and she could focus on her life and do what she loves to do. Through out the story she has a internal conflict and doesn't relize it until she feels better of her self. the main obstacles that interfered with her conflict is that she doesn't think she is good enough for anything. she could over come this obstacle by being more oversoul and doing things to make her happy with out thinking about it or questioning it.

concept 35

the only movie that i watched from the list is "Joan of Arc"

1.the protagonist Joan of Arc is taking a huge risk i Rate him a 9

2. I didn't get a ten but the hight rate was a 9 and the character that i chosed was the main character.if i was in the sam circumstance i wouldn't know how to react because everything is happening is going so fast and in his prospective he didn't know what to do until he relized what he had to do.

3. the last time that i took a risk in order to get something was the time that i decide to work with my sister i risked doing bad in school and having that free time i always had to spend with my friend and family. As a result i was always tiered and started to do bad in school but i worked it out and I am satisfied with my job and all the things that i had to risk. This was so worth my time because now I'm semi independent.

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super hero- the ability to fly
                 -the ability to read minds
                 -strong and fast
                 - contiouse that tells them wats rong and wats right

villain

1. flys 
2. strong and fast 
3. 3has no loved one 

the difference that they have is that the super hero has more ability to get to  know a person knows how to talk to people and people like him. in the other hand the villain is always depressed and no one likes him.

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2. the movie "Into the Wild" the author is using transcendentalism to explain the way that a man is trying to get away from technology society and wants to be part of the nature. transcendentalism movies are usually subjective to nature since the maine purpose of transcendentalism to have a simple life style,  oversoul, and other that make a human separate from society.

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my last birth day i had a party but since my birthday is the day after halloween i decided to make it a costume party. I invited many of my friends and many of them went. the day of my party i had to wake up early to help my mom cook and then decorate. after we were done with all the food preparation and the decorating i had to start to get ready before all my friends got there. At the time that my friends got there i was ready to start the party. the party was  great i had lots of fun and saw many of my friends. At the end i had to help out clean.

per4pilot #8

i thought that it was really good and unique. the format had some mistakes and i found some places in the begining that they put the same thing twice but they can fix that.  i think that the characters could be more unique, for example the main character is like the tipical new girl in school.

per.4 #6 pilot critique

As i was reading i kinda didn't understand what was happening because it was going from one place to the other. the romance of a senior girl and a freshmen guy is awkward because it is rare to see that but they have to make the characters more unique. the format is off in some places but that can be fixed fast. everything else besides that is fine.

groundhog Day Reflection

the no-lienear structure of this film was going back to the same day. and he was able to repeat/change what he did wrong.

groundhog day compared to memento is very different because in memento the story is going backwords and in groundhog the movie is just repeating the same day over and over aging. Im gessing that they kept repeating until he relized that being a good guy is not bad at all and that he shouldn't always think of himself all the time.

per4. pilot #4

i like the story how it goes because it is unique the kind of language is used, i liked  how it its unique in a way that it can show high school kids act in a way that they don't think about the actions untill there are consequenses. the characters they are not that unique they should try to make them more unique. the structure of the story is not perfect they need to improve it.

per4 pilot #3

the structure is really good. the story is good but i think they should try to change something in the story plot because there is a movie that is kinda like this one.."seventeen again"but everything else is good.

per.4 pilot #2

the fomat needs adjustment. the story is a kind of story that as it goes on its going to get boing.

PER.4 PILOT #1

It is unique the characters all talk different. i really like the situation

Psycho Reflection

What can you learn from the screenplay of Psycho? its kinda simple to understand but at the same time you cant understand it.
What is creative about the story structure?the story structure is unique it lets the viewer have suspence and wonder of who is the killer and what is going to happened.
 How unique are the characters?  they are very unique because they all talk their own ways and they have a michiviouse personality.
How does the writer use humor and symbolism in his writing?they use symbols to identify characters for example they birds the guy has on his was they symbolize they name of the girl.

critique #2

Format 2

Unique/Interesting Characters 1 

Entertaining story/conflict 2 

Comments: What suggestions do you have for improvement?

this story is like every other story that is about high school students. thy should try to be more unique and the characters with different personalities. try to create a conflict that might get all the friends involved to create something different.

Pilot Critique #1

it is interesting but it needs to add more on the conversation of the mother and daughter to tell that the daughter doesn't like to listen to the mother.
conflict:1
format: 2
interesting unique: 2

How do the writer's reveal character by dialogue and action for Jack, Kate, Hurley, Boone and Shannon?- he rvealed hem by the way they talked and what they would be doing like for boone "getting a "no service" signal on his cell phone" he also seems kind of nerviouse by the way he is talking. 
Compare the way Hurley talks to the way Jack talks. hurley talks like what ever he seems to not care but shocked at the same time and jack he is more seriouse of wht he is doing.
 What does this reveal about them? this reaveals that they all are different but manage to work together .
What is Shannon's relationship with her brother like?didn't get to her 

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#3
yes, i have been completely surprise by the outcome of something was a foregone conclusion. the event was in this movie i saw the football team was going to play their homecoming game and they were confident in winning but at the end they lost. i would develop this into a high concept scrips by adding more to the end so they have a chance or even make something else happen while the game is being played.

Desperate Housewives Pilot

1. Who are three of the main characters? How are they introduced in a unique way? mary alice, lynette, gabriel,

2. What is the conflict?- the death of mary alice and the problems of all the main characters 

3. What is the writing like? Does each character talk differently? How does the write use dialogue to advance the story?

the writing is unique with all the characters they all talk different. yes all character talk different. they use dialogue to advance the story in a way that all the characters are going through the simialer thing.

pilot reflection

our characters are going to be unique because they aren't going to be the "popular" ones like the ones in all the movies. they are gong to be the ones that no one really knows about they don't do anything to be popular or stand out. our show is going to be like a group of friends telling their stories and memories of high school and what they have gone through.the problem they are going to have is that they popular ones are going to get mad because they keep putting them on the spot wen they do something wrong. they are going to resolve it by becoming friends. but its going to be very difficult because they hardly have anything alike.  

 

my so called life

i think one idea we can use is the girl having a romance with a guy she doesn't think would actually like her. and the diff. groups that are around school.

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question3.
   the opposing character can't resolve their difference with one conversation because they have to talk out many problems. the characters mite of had many problems in the past so that cant be impossable to resolve the diffrences with one conversation.

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i have probably seen many of williams shakespeare's movies but the one that come up firs is romeo and juliet... in my pinion that has been the most famous one because it has been made over and over again and in all kinds of virsions.

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the one character i would pick is joe and the will be bonnie at the dance dancing with alex but bonnie is going to be looking at joe trying to tell him that he wants to be with him not with alex.

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the audience for the script i'm writing is for high school students the most because it is a girls and its brother's life in high school. they explaine how rough it is to be in high school and how finding a way to fit in with all  the other characters. the character relates to a high school student because thins might happen in many occations to many students in high school. once high school students see this they have an idea of how to work things out with bullies or get tips from the show. all in all their is a reason why they create shows and it is to let people know that their are various situations that are more consequenstioal then the ones they have.

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the main theme of my script is anything could happen. i choose this theme because many things can happen without you knowing specially things can caused by the people you least expected to be. the events that occurein the story are going to change the story because lindsay never expected to find mille with  a guy and sam never expected to be brave enough to step up to alan.

citizen kane

the non-leanier structure of citizen kane was great because u can understand the events even though they are not in order.
\one of the advantages that it has is that you can add things that u have forgot and still make sense. one odf the disadvantages is that some people may not understand it or not like this kind of structure.

in my opinion it must of been the best movie of all times  because it might of been the first one made in this structure and adding effect that they had never added to other movies in this period of time.

charles foster kane

well i don't really know that much about him i just saw that he had a great news paper compony. his company spread through out the united stated but then slowly shut down during the great depression .

freaks and geeks reflection

from the four episodes i saw my fav. one was  the halloween episode. i liked that one because it was funny, understanding, and it shows the mother daughter relation ship. the funniest part was when lindsay was trying to smash the pumpkin but it was fake and her shoes was stuck.

Dialogue Practice from Freaks and Geeks

Neal- high level vocabulary
daniel and nick-joke around about sex, and music
millie- good girl
karen- rood doesn't have manners
kim-fallows karen around and doesn't have manners
sam - not open minded, trys to be more mature
bill-wired, sometimes he doesn't think f what he is doing

review format

INT.hALLWAY 

Sam and his friends bill and neal are walking down the hallway talking. sam stared to walk faster because he needed to get to his locker.when allan is walking he same way eating a candy bar. Sam bumps into alan and makes him drop his candy bar.   

                  alan

          (angry)did u you just make me drop my candy bar 

                          SAM  

          don’t  you mean my candy because you did take it

        way from me and my friends

(Alan laughs)  

                   alan 

             no! they are my candies now 

Alan is arguing with Sam and making fun of him.Alan pushes Sam.so Sam decides to stand up to Alan’s bulling 

                   sam 

          (with attitude) you don’t scare me any more. say what 

    ever you want.you are just saying all this things because you

     don’t have any one that cares about you..

                  alan 

            shut up! so where are your “friends” or how u say 

               the ones that care for you.(laughs)

              sam 

              (stays quiet)uummmm...

                  alan 

        thats what i thought there not here to defend 

         you like all the times.

 Alan starts to get closer to Sam. Sam thinks that Alan is going to hit him so he pushes Alan.

                  

                                 ALAN  

                  oh. hell no. u know whats going to happen to you now..

Alan is about to punch Sam when Bill and Neal get there. bill grabs alan’s hand.

BILL

    if you mess with him you have to mess with us.

NEAL 

        yea!! you have to mess with us too.

ALAN laughs 

ALAN  

                  you guys think you guys can actually do something

                  to me.

SAM, BILL, AND NEAL start to get close to alan like if they are going to do something to alan. alan gets scared and runs away.

Neal 

                  He’s getting away lets go get him.. 

They start to chase alan around the whole school. 

                 

comiccon

how three writers broke into the business?


1. javier had to write a scrip in less than two months or else he will not be able to work on srip writing


2 was an assistace in ex-files- writers assistance


3make copies on a bat man spec so they told him to try to write one so he did and ended up getting a job there writing scrips.

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FADE IN: 


Dawn. The sun slowly rises over an African plain -- full, brilliant.


Native African VOICES respond in SONG. The SOLO VOICE
continues, joined by the group.






EXT. VICTORIA FALLS





AERIAL SHOT - A RIVER




Flocks of airborne FLAMINGOES cast shadows on the meandering

waterway, below.






ANGLE - THE CUB






THE SKY

A shaft of sunligt shines down through the clouds on the

future king.






FADE OUT

TITLE CREDIT: "THE LION KING"

SEQ. 1.2 (SCAR, ZAZU, MUFASA)

SFX: SNORING

screenplay

the mistake i did the most was putting too much details in the paragraphs. 

this is one part where i put too much detail: 

joseph is a young men that has just came back from the army, after serving his time in the military he decides that that was enough so he went back to his family.

new:

joseph is a young men that just came back home from the army after serving his time.

geeks and freaks

lindsay is trying to fit in and has a crush at daniel she is also trying to stop being a little moms girl.

2.the major plot on the halloween episode is lindsay driving around with her friends, giving out candy, and the when sam and his friends got bullied on.

3 at the end the plots came together when lindsay decides to dress up and help her mom give out candy and sam's dad goes to talk to him.

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1.one concept that i know best is mack up.
i can use this in a short film by giving tutorials or making a short film about a girl that loves to do make up and is a make u artist in a theater but then gets in trouble because of the make up she uses on the actors.

2.one of the subjects that i'm mostly unfamiliar with is investment.(1)at home i can ask my parents or people  that live with me if they know anything about investment.(2)at the library i can look up books that have to do with investment and in the internet i can look up info in google, yahoo, and many other web site that can be about investments.(3)i would always check more that once to see if the information is accurate and if is true.

3.a subject i absolutely know nothing about is italian.
student could take this class as a foreign language. in this class students will learn about the italian culture, the language and the traditions. the teachers that we would be best to fit this job would be teachers that are fluent speakers are influences with italian culture.in this class they will experiance a new language and about italian culture.besides students learning new things this will be a fun class that can be an essay A for students that are here to pay attention and are willing to learn.

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the three top films are avatar titanic, and Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows part 2.

lead character- jake(sam worthington)
main conflict- relationship they have
setting -Hogwarts castle
  




         jake arrives at Hogwarts castle and meets a young beautiful girl .They start talking but her parents don't let her talk to him because he is low class and they are high class. The girl notices that jake looks at her very ofter and she kind of notices that he is very handsome.she goes to him and starts talking to him.after a week they see each other but with out her parents knowing. they find out that both of them are in love with each other so they star a relationship with out her parents knowing. the parents find out and try to take them apart but they are unable to.


 my film will appeal to all the romance/wizard movie lovers because it is going to be about romance and wizards will be involved .

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3. character- rock star
setting-cementary
prop-notebook

the rock star starts to feel emocional so he decides to go to the cementary to visit his closest friend because he had died tow weeks ago.with him he takes a note but because when he is emocional he gets inspired .

EXT. on the way to the cementary
              
as he is on his way he starts to ask questions to his driver justin but he had forgot that one of his rules was that justin couldn't talk to him at any time no matter what.
  
                                                      rock star
                      (crying) justin why? why  did this have to happen to one of my friends? why?

                                                       rock star
                              justin why don't you answer my question
                                      
                                                      rock star
                           but why he was like my brother (extreamly crying)

justin doesn't answer him so he just talks to him self until he arrives at the cementary.

EXT. cementary
 he gets down from the car and stands outside the cementary for a little then walks to were his friend is at. he gets to his friends tomb and sits next to it.

                                                rock star
                    (talking to his friend)i dont know wat im going to do with out you
                    you were like my brother the one that inspire me to become a rock star.

                                                 rock star
                      what em i going to do! (screaming)what huh?
    
he takes out his notebook and decides he is going to write what he feels instead of screaming.

                                                     rock star
                      (writing)i feel my life is going to end i just lost the friend that supported
                       me the most. he was like my brother. i just cant believe hes gone for ever.
                      things have been changing since he died, my life had changed people even
                     say im a differente person and sometimes i just feel i am.

he continued writing and wrote about five pages. he read it over and thought what he rote made god cense for a lyrics.

                                                  rock star
                     ive got it im going to make a song about our lifes

he decides to go home and get started with the song he's thinking of making. he walks toward his limo.

INT. limo
he starts to write and its proud that he's doing it to share his life with his fans.

                                                        THE END

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1. orlando and reese are at the gym talking before a football game. they are talking about what has happened with their relationship, she things things have changed since he is more know at school. after a long conversation about them two orlando starts to change the conversation and reese thinks he doesn't care about her. it is almost time for the football and orlando is still talking to reese and she still wants to be with him but she doesn't understand that he's going to be the star of the game. orlando gets frusterated and gets mad at reese so he lives. reese burst out and start crying. orlando notices and feels bad so she convinces her to talk later. they make up and g to the game together. at the end orlandos team wins and saves his relationship with reese.

Continuation of Freaks and Geeks Scene

                                                                 sam
                                   (sights) me too i wish i had no school anymore
                                                                 lindsay
                                          mmmmm well good luck with that

ext. WILLIAM MCKINLEY HIGH SCHOOL PARKING LOT -day
while waiting for their dad sam and lindsay are talking about what happened with Alan.
                                                        
                                                                    lindsay
                                     sam so what is the problem with you and alan
                                                                sam
                                     i dont really know since the first day he has been picking on me
                                                                  lindsay
                                            (serious)oooooh i see
                                                                    sam
                                   lindsay what can i do. i dont wan t him to keep bothering me
                                                                  lindsay
                                 well u have to show him that you are not scared of him.
                                 come on sam he looks like a mini person next to you and your friends
                                                                sam
                                  sam stays quiet... (bursts out laughing)
to be continued.

high school tv shows

  

i like this shows because they are funny to watch.. they are also interesting and you learn how high school sometimes is diffecult to some people and it is not how you expected to be 

concept 7

1. one day-the hangover...(through dialogue)
   a week- the six sense   (through dialogue)
   several month-  twilight(through dialogue)
   ten or more years-harry potter (through character)

short script reflection

my best scene was when joseph was racing. its the best scene because most of the action happens there. my worst scene was the part when joseph rescues his father. it was the worst because i dint have much room to have more details because i was running out of space.i could of add more detail in the ending and remove some parts in the middle.