Friday, September 23, 2011

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INT.hALLWAY 
Sam and his friends bill and neal are walking down the hallway talking. sam stared to walk faster because he needed to get to his locker.when allan is walking he same way eating a candy bar. Sam bumps into alan and makes him drop his candy bar.   
                  alan
          (angry)did u you just make me drop my candy bar 
                          SAM  
          don’t  you mean my candy because you did take it
        way from me and my friends
(Alan laughs)  
                   alan 
             no! they are my candies now 
Alan is arguing with Sam and making fun of him.Alan pushes Sam.so Sam decides to stand up to Alan’s bulling 
                   sam 
          (with attitude) you don’t scare me any more. say what 
    ever you want.you are just saying all this things because you
     don’t have any one that cares about you..
                  alan 
            shut up! so where are your “friends” or how u say 
               the ones that care for you.(laughs)
              sam 
              (stays quiet)uummmm...
                  alan 
        thats what i thought there not here to defend 
         you like all the times.
 Alan starts to get closer to Sam. Sam thinks that Alan is going to hit him so he pushes Alan.
                  
                                 ALAN  
                  oh. hell no. u know whats going to happen to you now..
Alan is about to punch Sam when Bill and Neal get there. bill grabs alan’s hand.
BILL
    if you mess with him you have to mess with us.
NEAL 
        yea!! you have to mess with us too.
ALAN laughs 
ALAN  
                  you guys think you guys can actually do something
                  to me.
SAM, BILL, AND NEAL start to get close to alan like if they are going to do something to alan. alan gets scared and runs away.
Neal 
                  He’s getting away lets go get him.. 
They start to chase alan around the whole school. 
                 

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